Blackwood took the tablet, studied Kira’s file with the intensity of someone reading a tactical plan.
“How did she make it through basic training with these scores?”
“Different standards, sir. Basic training is about establishing baseline capabilities. We’re about developing elite—”
“She represents institutional failure.”
Blackwood handed back the tablet.
“I want to observe her during today’s training exercises. If Crimson Ridge is producing soldiers like this, we need to have serious conversations about your academy’s continued operation.”
The words carried weight.
Congressional hearings about Afghanistan withdrawal failures had put elite training facilities under a microscope. Budget cuts were threatened. Oversight committees were questioning whether specialized academies like Crimson Ridge justified their costs.
Blackwood’s inspection could shut them down.
Colonel Thatcher swallowed his objections and nodded.
“Of course, General. Private Ashford will be participating in urban warfare simulations this afternoon.”
Blackwood smiled, though there was no warmth in it.
“Excellent. Let’s see what your development philosophy produces.”
He didn’t tell the colonel about his son.
About Lieutenant Marcus Blackwood, killed in Helmand Province four years earlier when an IED destroyed his vehicle during a routine patrol. He didn’t mention how the after-action report had cited operational errors, how Blackwood had convinced himself those errors stemmed from lowered standards, from diversity quotas, from letting people serve who shouldn’t.
Marcus had died with a female soldier on his team—a soldier who, according to reports, had hesitated under fire.
Blackwood had spent four years channeling his grief into a crusade against what he saw as the degradation of military excellence.
When he looked at struggling recruits like Private Ashford, he didn’t see a person.
He saw the weakness that had killed his son.
The morning formation went smoothly, but Blackwood’s presence turned the routine into something tense and pressurized. He stood at the front with Thatcher, his gaze sweeping across the 587 assembled personnel like a weapon system acquiring targets.
Kira stood in her usual position in the back row, maintaining the slightly uncertain posture she’d perfected. But even from fifty meters away, she felt Blackwood’s attention settle on her.
Not suspicion exactly.
Something colder.
Assessment and dismissal happening simultaneously.
She was nothing to him. A data point representing failure.
After formation dismissed, Blackwood requested Kira’s training schedule. He planned his entire day around observing her.
Physical training at 0700.
Weapons maintenance at 0900.
Tactical briefing at 1030.
Urban warfare simulation at 1400 hours.
The physical training was deliberately brutal. Five-mile run along the coastal road, elevation changes that could break ankles, wind coming off the Pacific that felt like frozen knives.
Kira finished last, as she always did, arriving six minutes behind the lead group.
Blackwood watched from a vehicle that paced the run. He made notes in a leather portfolio.
The weapons maintenance session showed Kira fumbling with basic tasks any competent soldier should handle reflexively. Disassembling her rifle took twice as long as it should. Reassembly required instructor assistance. The other recruits helped her without being asked, the way units naturally assisted struggling members.
Blackwood saw accommodation where he believed he should have seen failure.
More notes in the portfolio.
The tactical briefing was worse.
The instructor laid out a building clearance scenario, and Kira asked questions that seemed to miss obvious tactical considerations. She confused hand signals. She requested clarification on basic radio protocols. She appeared confused by concepts she should have mastered in basic training.
Blackwood’s expression grew progressively darker throughout the briefing.
At lunch, he pulled Colonel Thatcher aside.
“How is that recruit still here?”
“Sir, as I mentioned, our philosophy—”
“Your philosophy is creating a liability that will get people killed in real combat. She’s seventeen weeks into training and still can’t complete a five-mile run without finishing last. She can’t fieldstrip her rifle without help. She doesn’t understand basic tactical concepts. What exactly are you developing here?”
Thatcher struggled for a response.
“Some soldiers are late bloomers, General. With proper support and—”
“Support?” Blackwood’s voice rose slightly. “In real combat, who’s going to support her when she freezes under fire? Who’s going to help her reload her rifle when she’s taking contact from the enemy?”
Several nearby personnel turned at his tone. Thatcher glanced around, uncomfortable with the public nature of the conversation.
“We can discuss this in private, sir.”
“I want to see her in the urban warfare simulation this afternoon. If she performs at the levels suggested by these scores, I’m recommending immediate review of your academy’s entire training program.”
The urban warfare facility occupied five acres of the academy grounds. Shipping containers and plywood structures created a mock city that could be reconfigured to simulate different environments. Narrow streets, tall buildings, blind corners—every element designed to test tactical decision-making under stress.
Kira was assigned to a six-person squad with a simple objective: clear out a building, extract a simulated hostage, avoid simulated casualties. Paintball weapons added consequence to mistakes.
General Blackwood positioned himself in an observation tower that provided a clear view of the entire exercise. He lifted binoculars as the squad moved out.
From ground level, Master Sergeant Ror watched both the exercise and the general. He’d tried to warn Kira that morning, but training schedules had kept them separated. Now all he could do was watch and hope she maintained her performance.
The squad moved through the mock city with reasonable competence. Four of the six members demonstrated proper tactical awareness. They used hand signals effectively, cleared corners with appropriate caution, covered each other’s movements.
Kira struggled visibly throughout.
She was slow to respond to hand signals, requiring the squad leader to repeat commands. When crossing open ground under simulated fire, she hesitated, earning a paintball hit to the shoulder that would have been a casualty in real combat. During the building clearance phase, she appeared confused about room entry procedures, forcing her team to adjust their approach.
The squad failed to complete the mission within the allocated time. Post-exercise analysis indicated that Kira’s positioning errors had contributed to two simulated casualties.
Through his binoculars, Blackwood watched every mistake with growing fury.
This wasn’t just poor performance.
This was someone who, in his view, would get her entire team killed in real operations.
He lowered the binoculars slowly, his jaw tight with barely controlled anger.
Colonel Thatcher stood beside him, clearly uncomfortable.
“That,” Blackwood said quietly, “is exactly what I’m here to fix.”
What neither of them saw was what happened after the exercise officially ended.
The squad regrouped at the extraction point, removing safety equipment and conducting after-action review. Kira drifted away slightly, checking her gear, appearing to be alone.
She wasn’t alone.
Security Camera 3 had an angle on her position.
For exactly seventeen seconds, when Kira thought no one was watching, she moved differently.
She cleared the entire floor of a three-story structure with textbook precision, moving from room to room with the fluid efficiency of someone who’d done it a thousand times. Her weapon handling was perfect. Her movement was controlled. Her tactical awareness was sharp and deadly.
Then she glanced up, saw the camera angle, and immediately reverted to her uncertain, fumbling persona.
In the academy security office, the technician monitoring Camera 3 sat forward in his chair.
“What the hell…?”
He replayed the footage three times, then flagged it for Master Sergeant Ror’s review.
Ror watched it alone that evening in his office—watched Kira transform from struggling recruit to elite operator and back again in the span of twenty seconds.
He’d suspected, but seeing the proof still sent chills down his spine.
This wasn’t someone learning to be competent.
This was someone working desperately to appear incompetent.
The question was why.
And the more pressing question was whether she could maintain the act under Blackwood’s increasing scrutiny.
He had a terrible feeling he was about to find out.
Day ninety-five began with another formation at 0600 hours.
The transport from the barracks had broken down, causing three recruits, including Kira, to arrive thirty seconds late.
Thirty seconds.
In a normal week, it would have warranted mild correction—maybe extra duty, nothing severe.
But General Vincent Blackwood was not in the mood for mercy.


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